Apitong :)

My sincerest gratitude for 3rd year apitong. thanks! <3

Apitong:)

Gushing through the wind of hardship

Crossing the unbeatable river of sallies

People of different ages and attitudes

Stood together hand in hand

I see them before me

Despite the unluckiness that I felt

I was relieved to finally meet them

Different names were given to each

And so were features to be used by themselves

They're a family

A very tight, loving, caring, fun, energetic

And most of all, a family that knows how to accept

Remaining hand in hand

They've crossed the challenges placed before them

In their eyes were the taste of sweetness and bitterness

I was there

I saw everyone of theme

I never knew all

But I remember each 

I asked for help

They gave action

Along with my journey, I took them

Having them included in my precious memory

As I took my last days at SMS.

The look on their faces corresponds;

Guilt, luck, patience, honesty, hate, anger, revenge

Knowing what each felt, i felt guilty, hatred but thankful

Joy, all the laughter

Tears, all the hardships

Tightness, all the sallies, obligations, and adventures

They were together. Always.

After long trainings and studies

They now reach the point of no return

Loving the fact that each of them wanted to be together again

But hating the truth that soon they will be broken apart

I'll always remember and cherish the laughters we've shared 

And stories we've told

My dear Apitong thank you!

I'll never forget to look on the past!

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Reviews

[bianca]

wow. you must be really close to them. this is a good write! keep it up.

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and positive poem. I like the feel of hope and thankfulness. Thank you for sharing a part of your life. A excellent poem.
Coyote