You're Difficult to Understand

I kept this one for a long time and I'm finally over it!

You're Difficult to Understand

I always thought you're demented
I always thought you're obsessed
I never thought of how you feel
And I never thought it would be this hard.
Why are you acting like this?
You are lucky to be handled
You're lucky because we care
But you're difficult to Understand

We've given you advice to help yourself
Because you alone can only fix this
But you left it and gone your own way
Your mother and father began to loathe you
and you're being oblivious with your vicinity
The man deceived you
And yet you're there to care for him
How do you handle this demeanor of yours?

We all know that you're modest and smart
But you're being conceited about him
What has the boy done to you?
You're being stagy and all!
You begin to loathe me behind my back
And I also felt the same way
But bickering won't save the problem
I'm not the only one who cared for you
You know deep within your heart
Even though you abhor me and all
I still care about you!

Always remember we're here to help and emend
Though we knew this will be hard
Because you're difficult to Understand.

Author's Note

Ignore wrong typo's and grammars..
Reviews would be very much appreciated!
thanks!

Reviews

[Kathryn]

I love it :) There are a few grammar mistakes, but (as you asked for those not to be mentioned anyway) I only mention them because they acctually add to the piece. There is something about the half-sentances that adds more mystery than perfect grammar could ever hope to achieve. Beautiful work, well

[ashley]

I like this, it's very good. Good job! :D

[Huggy Bear]

Powerful and enjoyable:)

[Daydreamer54]

it'd true th love covers a multitude of all faults and we shouldn'tlet anyone ruin our lives. That's what i got out of this! I hope things get better for you and this person you r writing about. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe us humans are becoming more hard to understand. In the days of old we allow people to be different and learn to accept. I could feel the the separation and desire of concern. Advice is a funny thing. We appreciate the advice after we swim in error. I like the ending. A very good poem. You made me think.
Coyote