You're Difficult to Understand

I kept this one for a long time and I'm finally over it!

You're Difficult to Understand

I always thought you're demented
I always thought you're obsessed
I never thought of how you feel
And I never thought it would be this hard.
Why are you acting like this?
You are lucky to be handled
You're lucky because we care
But you're difficult to Understand

We've given you advice to help yourself
Because you alone can only fix this
But you left it and gone your own way
Your mother and father began to loathe you
and you're being oblivious with your vicinity
The man deceived you
And yet you're there to care for him
How do you handle this demeanor of yours?

We all know that you're modest and smart
But you're being conceited about him
What has the boy done to you?
You're being stagy and all!
You begin to loathe me behind my back
And I also felt the same way
But bickering won't save the problem
I'm not the only one who cared for you
You know deep within your heart
Even though you abhor me and all
I still care about you!

Always remember we're here to help and emend
Though we knew this will be hard
Because you're difficult to Understand.

Author's Note

Ignore wrong typo's and grammars..
Reviews would be very much appreciated!
thanks!

Reviews

[Kathryn]

I love it :) There are a few grammar mistakes, but (as you asked for those not to be mentioned anyway) I only mention them because they acctually add to the piece. There is something about the half-sentances that adds more mystery than perfect grammar could ever hope to achieve. Beautiful work, well

[A Lone Creative Nomad]

I think that with each poem you get more and more talented.

[Taylor H.]

I'm making up for reviews I haven't returned. So you may get a few from me depending :). OK, I agree with simple_me. I really liked this poem!

[rielovella]

Are you trying to tell something about someone? :)) Anyway, nice poem.

[Simple_mee]

A thought-provoking write. Very powerful too :)

[deadly healer]

i really like this. i wish we could all feel this way and try to understand people eventhough maybe its hard to. i sort of wonder myself after reading this if my methods for helping people see they are ok are the greatest. you seem to have enlightened me with this matter. thanks for sharing.
:D deadly healer

[Camille Corbett]

It was sort of lackluster.

[jhed]

thanks for those who reviewed! I really appreciate your comments on this little piece of work!

[r]

strong poem, powerful message... i like it

[Catti*Bre]

Wow this was really good

[WriterSki7]

A well-written poem concerning people you care about. I find myself surprisingly pleased with this poem, but that could just be because it has stirred me emotionally. It was a good poem with a nice flow to it. Well done.