You're Difficult to Understand

I kept this one for a long time and I'm finally over it!

You're Difficult to Understand

I always thought you're demented
I always thought you're obsessed
I never thought of how you feel
And I never thought it would be this hard.
Why are you acting like this?
You are lucky to be handled
You're lucky because we care
But you're difficult to Understand

We've given you advice to help yourself
Because you alone can only fix this
But you left it and gone your own way
Your mother and father began to loathe you
and you're being oblivious with your vicinity
The man deceived you
And yet you're there to care for him
How do you handle this demeanor of yours?

We all know that you're modest and smart
But you're being conceited about him
What has the boy done to you?
You're being stagy and all!
You begin to loathe me behind my back
And I also felt the same way
But bickering won't save the problem
I'm not the only one who cared for you
You know deep within your heart
Even though you abhor me and all
I still care about you!

Always remember we're here to help and emend
Though we knew this will be hard
Because you're difficult to Understand.

Author's Note

Ignore wrong typo's and grammars..
Reviews would be very much appreciated!
thanks!

Reviews

[Kathryn]

I love it :) There are a few grammar mistakes, but (as you asked for those not to be mentioned anyway) I only mention them because they acctually add to the piece. There is something about the half-sentances that adds more mystery than perfect grammar could ever hope to achieve. Beautiful work, well

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent work expressing these feelings. I enjoyed it.

[Helpless]

yes people can often be hard to read, but once you figure out how, its worth it in the end :)

[Rene Velez]

great write the flow and construction are superb, relationships can be hard, holding things in even worse, it's good to let it out, good one Jhed

[Roxi L]

Really Powerful. I like it!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[brenda]

good flow in the poem great write !:)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very good.

[TJ]

what a beautiful and deep piece of work. if this doesnt respect a peson experience then you must be a true empaht because this seems to come straight from the heart.
it's so sad when relationships change people we love into people we don't even know

[bianca]

wow. very talented. strong words and emotions. i wonder where you get those? xD keep writing!