Sorry

dedicated to our friend...You should know that you're always important we can't be a group without you.. :)

Sorry

I never knew it would come to this point

Once a joke, it started a big fight

We said sorry, but pride rises within you.

We talked to you, but got no replies at all.

I thought friendship stands when all else has fallen

I thought friendship remains.

But why does this keep on going?

We all know that this is part of God’s trial

We all know friends should help each other

But now, we’re not getting help from each other

Instead, fights and arguments are on way.

We’re making a simple fight into a disaster.

A blast!

Are we gonna fix this?

Is there hope for us?

Will it be over?

We all know that on every dark cloud

There is a silver lining.

How come you’re making it so hard for us?

We’re the one who’s making the move

And yet…

And yet, you still didn’t notice.

We know within ourselves that we’re true to you

That’s why we’re saying sorry

As we approach you.

“I’M SORRY MY DEAR FRIEND. I HOPE YOU FORGIVE US!”

 

Author's Note

All suggestions accepted!! Thanks..

Reviews

[bianca]

a best way to say your sorry to a person.

[Jim Lozkittle]

Very good. I liked this poem alot and your portrayal of appology is very deep

[Simple_mee]

Nice write. At times in our life we all face situations somewhat like this.
It has bee very wisely said that it takes decades to build a strong relation but only a harsh word to break all bonds. Commiting a mistake n then bowing to it takes a lot out of u n ur ego.

I really liked reading this one... ;)

[maryjaneuy]

nice poem.
Is this about Erika? :D
keep it up. :)

[rielovella]

Another nice poem of yours. Can I ask? Is this your another way to talk about what happened yesterday? Sorry, I'm curious. I hope that what happened yesterday will be okay now. And I like that you applied a cliche in your poem.. :)) Keep up the good work.