Today was a Fairytale

it just came and I don't know why..ahahaha..Maybe still thinking of him.. :)

Today was a Fairytale

 

I woke up and stared at the ceiling

 

I see your face and experience this feeling.

 

I don’t know how it all happened

 

I just realized it always makes me smile.

 

I went to school and saw you

 

I didn’t notice the things in my hand fell.

 

You saw what happened

 

And you help me pick it up.

 

I went to my class with a smile on my face

 

And everyone seemed surprised.

 

I was different from the old me

 

And I don’t know why.

 

Then, you came inside

 

And sat beside me.

 

My face turned red as you touch my arm

 

And then you talked to me like we’ve known each other.

 

The time passed by and yet, I was thinking of you

 

I went home laughing to myself.

 

Mama saw me and smiled wide

 

Surprise on her face, she asked me,

 

‘How was your day?’ she asked.

 

Then I answered with a smile,

 

‘Well, Today was a Fairytale.’

 

She smiled as I went to my room

 

Still laughing at myself.

 

Author's Note

Ignore the rhythm and please tell me what to change. Thanks! :)

jhed:)
"ALWAYS SMILE:)"

Reviews

[QuothCorvid]

You are switching from past to present tense in different parts of your poem. I wasn't sure if this was deliberate or not, but it kind of threw me. Other wise it reminded me of that rush of a thrill you get when you like some one and they notice you. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

A kind and sweet poem. The small things in a life make us content and happy. I like the story. A excellent poem.
Coyote