Today was a Fairytale

it just came and I don't know why..ahahaha..Maybe still thinking of him.. :)

Today was a Fairytale

 

I woke up and stared at the ceiling

 

I see your face and experience this feeling.

 

I don’t know how it all happened

 

I just realized it always makes me smile.

 

I went to school and saw you

 

I didn’t notice the things in my hand fell.

 

You saw what happened

 

And you help me pick it up.

 

I went to my class with a smile on my face

 

And everyone seemed surprised.

 

I was different from the old me

 

And I don’t know why.

 

Then, you came inside

 

And sat beside me.

 

My face turned red as you touch my arm

 

And then you talked to me like we’ve known each other.

 

The time passed by and yet, I was thinking of you

 

I went home laughing to myself.

 

Mama saw me and smiled wide

 

Surprise on her face, she asked me,

 

‘How was your day?’ she asked.

 

Then I answered with a smile,

 

‘Well, Today was a Fairytale.’

 

She smiled as I went to my room

 

Still laughing at myself.

 

Author's Note

Ignore the rhythm and please tell me what to change. Thanks! :)

jhed:)
"ALWAYS SMILE:)"

Reviews

[LaLaLuna]

i love this poem. it's great. the emotions were expressed clearly and reading this made me smile

[InsanityIsTheNewBlack]

very nice. :D i have moments like that sometimes, which makes it easy to relate. :) well done, from an amature's point of view.

[deadly healer]

i loved this poem. it did feel like a fairytale. it was sweet

[AmeliaMae]

This was really good. I love things like this. It flowed well and it is definately something everyone can associate with. Good work! :)

[The Analog Kid]

Sweet poem. I like the way it flows so lightly...like you were floating through the day since it was a "fairytale." I enjoyed the read.

Patrick

[alison13]

i like it..one of my favorites.. :)

[jhed]

thankyou thankyou sooo..much!!!

[Therene]

Ping! T. Swift waters. :D

There are some inconsistent verb tense but it didn't really destroyed the essence of the poem.

This is truly fairytale-like.

Keep writing.

[Katerina C]

i think i love this poem

[Huggy Bear]

Very magical and deep. Good job:)