Fallen

There are mirrors everywhere

If we’d only choose to see them

We are in everyone around us

No one exclusive to not condemn

We have all been there

Far too long not to see

We have all fallen down the stairways

Of the paths we choose to lead

Never fear the moments

Never fear the pain

For without the moments of agony

We conquer not and find no gain

So remember the man beside you

Or that woman or her child

For they too have journeyed

And fallen in the wild

Reviews

[hannah]

this is very true, i love the first few lines
"there are mirrors everywhere
if only we choose to see them"

it is like you are suggesting that we have many chances to reflect on ourselves, but we don't take those opportunities, which makes it difficult for us to really improve and grow. (we are fallen) very nicely written and i definitely agree! quite philosophical too, as blackrose said c; good job, great write, and lovely read!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

wonderful, very hippie haha love it

[blackrose]

Wow has a hint of philosophical view
Definitely a good read