Here i am

Feeling completely human

Tears fall

Skin catch

Moist absorbed through ever patch

Every blink, the rain drops fall

From sunken sockets, the human calls

Can't go on, Can't let go

For the tears you leak will make you so

A clenching smile, behind the truth

The facaded poses in a photo booth

The swelling infesting behind your heart

Wanting to burst and tell the world, here you are

Author's Note

constructive feedback please :-)
p.s i used a picture of myself as this poem was written about myself at a particular moment in my life

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Nicely done, love the photo booth line. great flow and pace.

[J Todd Underhill]

I liked the piece but it seemed to start out with a sad undertone and finished on what seemed a positive note. well done indeed.

[Kim]

I really liked the emotional feel of this write! Real and heartfelt!