Freedom

Freedom

A Poem by Jessica Green
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Written july 2011 Aberystwyth university residential week Free verse

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Remote, alone, dying

dying without realising, wanting to live

wanting to be free, wanting to fulfill you're life.

 

A phoenix, beautiful, exquisite, free.

Its flamed broadened wings elegantly gliding through the burning sun, magic.

A path, just like any other path.

A path that anyone could dream.

A door, A sky, A cloud

Leading off into the mirage of life, freedom.

 

A glistening oasis, tempting your eyes.

Taking you to your wildest dreams.

Forming lights in your eyes, lights in your soul

lights in your wings, like a phoenix.

© 2011 Jessica Green


Author's Note

Jessica Green
any constructive feedback welcome :-)

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This was the best I've read from you yet, you dance very near cliches, but here it couldn't matter less.

I believe you are at your strongest when you write in this open-ended breathtaking style.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This piece defiantly fits the title to let one’s self to absorb what life has to offer.
Excellent write.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's kind of positive even thought it starts not in that way .. i felt like it was romantice, dreamy , wishing , hoping , wanting ...
I really like your words...
and the journey ..nice poem :)


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jessica Green
Jessica Green

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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Jess, 17, Birmingham Hoping to pursue a career in writing. I don't limit myself to what i can do, i want to try everything that is possible in my lifetime. I could watch the starry night sky fore.. more..

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