UNTITLED 1

Written for a cool little contest... an advanced ten/forty... ten words... forty lines...

 

UNTITLED

By: JB Murray © nov 2009

(advanced ten/forty poetry contest) 

 

 

 

It dissolves, swiftly

Like forever strangers

The B side of an old 45

Not quite a friend

A roll of the dice

More tears

A separation of will from hope

The ink bleeding from a newspaper

Black fingers

No rhyme

Author's Note

enjoy...

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Well I did enjoyed it! Fantastic write.....thanks for
submitting this to Tovli's contest! ~ Helena

[Tovli]

LOVED this. Excellent! tovli

[LeeLee Ryder]

GOOD ONE... I love how you connected/compared
forever strangers with the B side of an old 45
a brilliant connection....
I also like:The ink bleeding from a newspaper Black fingers
Kudos
LeeLeesmallworld
(I entered that contest too.. check out Cacciatore Hunter)