A little bliss

A little bliss

A Poem by Jeyanthi

The morning dews
melt in the touch
with the bubbles joy
showers bursting
the petals of liveliness
colours my life
as the piano flows
under your fingers
the musical listens
fondly invites
smiles swirling
and dancing
the good deeds
reaches
above the sky beyond
the weariness fading
with the stars
blossom around
caress of soft twinkles
to sleep in awaiting
sparking dreams
with morning sun
wishes.

© 2024 Jeyanthi


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What a burst of colour and happiness this is. Sometimes we can forget that such colours exist in midwinter, but they are there if you look closely enough.
With colour comes happiness and we could all be doing with a bit more of that, can't we?
Nicely penned.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Wonderful and amazing dance of world. I could hear the music and I could see the beauty of the morning sun. Hello Jeyanthi and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

1 Month Ago

Thank you sir 🙏.. it motivates me... to write more joyous poem.. and share with all .. :)
A very beautiful poem, loving the mood as I read this, light but so heart warming.
Nature is always the best beauty to my eyes.
Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

1 Month Ago

Thank you Amy for your time and review and kind words... 😀
Amy R

1 Month Ago

You're welcome
SOOO nice. This is the kind of poem one can hang out in with a glass or wine or tea. Much appreciated its wording and mood:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words 🙏... 😀

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Added on November 28, 2024
Last Updated on December 6, 2024
Tags: Life, Inspiration, learning, writing

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Jeyanthi
Jeyanthi

India



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