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Ravin' prompt- you are what you eat....📖

I’m reading on the dim light,
as evenings are quite,
the thud,
a sound,
the dangling fluffy tail,
meets my loneliness trail,
a brief of squeaking,
and a lot of gnawing,
a little squirrel,
has a great deal,
seeing it as a nut cracker,
a lesson given, me the taker.

Author's Note

Hard workers are nuts cracker, OK not that 😅 but can crack the exams...
Be studious... ! Picture from Pinterest.

Reviews

[Marie]

A lovely poem about meeting up with your dog in the evening, dear Jeyanthi. A nice relaxed evening reading and your little dog comes along to keep you company and for treats! He is teaching you that you are not alone, that he is there with you to keep you company. That is a lovely, enriching lesson to learn, dear Jeyanthi. Lovely work, dear. Thank you for sharing...

[Jeyanthi]

Pets do understand more than others do.. I was a child how like loneliness, I could be seen in cow shed only with hens nearby. I had a swing there, I used to be there alone.. or I could be on up
nearby my home tree.. but after some maturity, I came out of it... thinking back it looks so wired..how unusual I was... my doggy was with me, it was used to follow till the bus stop during school days. .we all love it... it stayed with ideally 12years after it's gone... after that we don't have any pet... it's November here, during this month only semester exam and half yearly goes on though we feel sleepy only all time because of climate, waking up at 🌄 in chilling climate to study is also hard, but having companion and gentle reminders can make this study time more meaningful( sorry I left the line

[Jeyanthi]

(** a little squirrel, has a great deal)...
During editing I left it by mistake... :)
Hope everything is OK and normal there... in my country we had Strom flood During monsoon season.. I'm praying 🙏 no tsunami to hit us... to move on from nov and dec month is really gives some frightful feelings..

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Jeyanthi.
We had very bad flooding in town last Saturday. One hundred families were evacuated when our beautiful river burst its banks. The centre of town was impassable thanks to Storm Bert. I hope you don't have a tsunami, dear Jeyanthi. I hope all goes well with your monsoon season too, dear friend... Take very good care of you, keep safe and well...

[JustJulie]

Delightful in a word Morning feast.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you.. 😀

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

What a clever way to illustrate the value of hard work, Jeyanthi! I love how you compared the focus and perseverance of a "nutcracker" to the effort needed to crack exams. The imagery of the tiny creature working diligently under dim light captures the essence of hard work and determination. It’s a reminder that even the smallest actions, when done with dedication, can lead to great outcomes. Thank you for sharing such an insightful and creative poem!

[Jeyanthi]

Yes dear ... perseverance and patience are needed these days, focusing on each step can reduce the stress levels intently.. thank you for valuable review and comments 😊..

[Gregoria Somol Ahmed]

Thank you, Jeyanthi! Your words are very insightful, and I truly appreciate the message of perseverance and focus. It's always a pleasure to engage with your work. Wishing you all the best! 😊