Morning moon

Nature- a story teller

The morning moon beams
story forgotten to tell
hidden behind clouds.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Your poem is my moon's cousin; there's such a story behind your haiku, Jeyanthi - the things they could tell! A subtle secret, lunar mystic..

[Jeyanthi]

Hey yeah..
Ready with moon boots,
Romp on the bounds..
I already
heard
can write poetry
from there too.. ;)

[emmajoygreen]

Hugs. Later if possible.. take care of you, please. And yes, you can and will write poetry from and to anywhere.

[JustJulie]

How many stories did or does the moon hide? I want to know

[Jeyanthi]

(Your dp is beautiful, the glasses looks more cuter on you.. :) )
They say na "some are passing clouds" though it is... the story behind is sometimes we fail to use magical words, where the feelings follow us afterwards... a sorry at the permissible time can change the story and give better understanding.. a please can make things doable... thank you can be encouraging and brings smiles and welcoming... sometimes we miss it to use by reacting to the situations than being ourselves... it is meant for 'not shying away to take chances...'

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and comments too. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Wonderful haiku. Indeed what tales the moon could tell if she were prone to gossip.

[Jeyanthi]

She is so pure white, we love to paint with our needed colours...
Thank you for your great comments and review.. :)

[Soren]

This paints a picture that tells the story deeper than the blue sky nicely worded it creates a puzzle for the mind to work on.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you for sharing your thoughts beautifully and kind review.. 😇 🙏✨️

[Arundass TP]

A mystery in this poem. Interesting. Loved reading

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you 😀...

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it's a very mysterious and thought-provoking piece. i feel some anguish over the words unspoken, stories i haven't told anyone.

[Jeyanthi]

Yes absolutely... that's one of conscious thinking... thanks for saying that.. it's true 👍

[Lorry]

Goodly good! Trying to keep the review shorter than the poem itse... Aww! 😃

[Jeyanthi]

Sir.. thank you 😀...
I wrote smaller version than this before... may I feature that... am not sorry if you can't find a word to comment on it.. 😅

Your words are safe with me sir incase of any gentle reminder.. 😅

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful imagery. Well done.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you, sir 🙏

[Amy R]

Every morning I look for the moon in the sky, when it's still dark and the sun hasn't risen yet,
It looks so dreamy with the twinkling stars around.
-Amy

[Marie]

Wonderful Haiku, dear Jeyanthi. A beautiful picture of a dull morning finely sketched through excellent word choice for your reader. Love it! Well done, dear friend. Lovely work...

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you Marie 😀...
Haiku sometimes mysterious sometimes realization...
:)

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Jeyanthi... Yes, Haiku is sometimes mysterious, but still a lovely format... Thank you again for sharing, dear friend...