Untouched

Sea and the joy

The fragrance of salty,

the sand glides on the palm,

the dreams of fantasy castle,

the wishpers of ocean,

the underneath another world,

the beauty of sunrise and sunset,

the radiance that glitters,

the passing waves,

washes the sorrow away,

nah!

the expensive slippers long gone.

Author's Note

😅 thanks for reading

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear poet.
"The radiance that glitters,
the passing waves,
washes the sorrow away,"
Dear Jeyanthi, the sea can take my sadness away. Beautiful and wonderful movement of words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jeyanthi]

I lived once near the sea by, I miss those days... when we are there beach, don't how time moves so fast... can't always get eyes full all the time, sea can make such closeness....
My relative child stepped into sea just because the water can was gone along the waves, she did by her innocence and I was rightly pulled her back though I was carrying 7month ... same thing my beloved fallen into sea because of misunderstanding and fight.. he works there due to his work nature... but, God's and ocean grace are sometimes immerse...
I do love sea and in safe distance always.. :)

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it's a wonderful piece. you paint a picture of somebody, in their loneliness, going to the beach and staring out at the water.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you Ern 😀...
Yes, it's in our eyes how we see things.. :)