Sunset

Also, can tag with Lord Shiva's voice box similarly biblical eden garden adam eve lucifer.

Rippen dip afloats
The orange fruit flames flavors
On honey ocean.

Author's Note

The fall
( But I'm confused with orange or yellow 🤔)

Reviews

[Abida~]

A bright poem.
A Haiku for the falll!
I loved the placing of metaphors and found it visually pleasing!

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you 😀
Hope you have a brightful day 😎

[Abida~]

I'm enjoying the puns, truly.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you 😀..
That motivates me to amuse you often...

[Marie]

A beautifully penned Haiku on Autumn, Jeyanthi. Orange and yellow are both identified with Fall especially in Autumn leaves. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing...

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah....
Falling too radiates colours 😅.... (not to afraid of falling)..
Thank you ... Marie..
😀

[Marie]

Most welcome always, dear Jeyanthi...

[Amy R]

Love this tiny poem, a bright haiku.
Thanks for sharing.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you 😀

[Amy R]

No problem

[Dave W.]

Great Haiku, now I would like something cinnamon spiced with orange and honey.

[Jeyanthi]

That can be great for weight loss..

[Dave W.]

Wait are you saying I'm fat.........just kidding....

[Jeyanthi]

U found it.. . 😶‍🌫️
😅