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Don't strive for it when
Kindness unserved belittle,
Lessons failed at young.

Author's Note

Can you find the positivity in this negative sentences 😅

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I had a pretty strict upbringing when it comes to respecting others, and putting others first, kindness can be our guide...Maybe we can eventually learn from mistakes...but a solid base (lessons when young) really help.
Oh my, I like this senryu.
j.

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks for letting me know your thoughts on this haiku.
Yeah me too, my parents were/are strict officers 😅

[Davidgeo]

Pain from the youth is rough... the memories are at the very least distorted, but the feeling is still visceral. The very much absolute worst are pre verbal memories... it's very important to not f**k your kids up before age 5 -7... that's when we wire the base of our brain and create the foundation for our personality... but none of us really remember the actual memory, we just "remember" how the memory made us feel. If a child "remembers" something awful from that time in their life, it will help form the foundation of their personality... AND.... it's too far back to actually remember as an adult, so, there will be no real self introspection on that; "healing" is not really possible when the memories are pre verbal.

[Jeyanthi]

I copy that..
Thanks for letting know your comments 🙂

[Davidgeo]

There should be a mandatory "parenting" class for teenagers. It should not be assumed "adults" know how to raise children. The most successful "adults" are often times the worst parents.

[Lobos]

A deep reflection in just a few words. The simplicity of the poem conveys a direct and powerful message about the consequences of our choices and the lessons unlearned throughout life.

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah...
That's right ✅️

[Snow_]

I second all this reviews....amazing advice

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you 😊 🙏

[Lisasview]

Good morning,
I always look at the glass half full rather than half empty...
For me that is the only way to live a happy life.
Lisasview, now in Spain

[Snow_]

True, I hope i will become like you too.

[Jeyanthi]

Good morning 🙏,
Yeah... half filled and can see the empty as space to get refilled...
read moreGood morning 🙏,
Yeah... half filled and can see the empty as space to get refilled...
Thank you dear... 😀

[Jeyanthi]

@Snow...
I appreciate you !! 😃😃

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome!

[Dave W.]

Jey what was your inspiration for this, I liked it.

[Jeyanthi]

Time is the inspiration...
We must value our time...
It just popped out, when I comment on others work...
We must not regret later...
We can't revise or revist the time, which is gifted.

(Out of Realization)

[Dave W.]

Your response is also a nice poem as well. I just wrote a poem about the stars and time passing by to quickly. I hope you have a great night.

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah 😀😀...
Have a Good sleep 😴 💤...
Here afternoon 🍛🥗

[Dave W.]

Actually I'm up all night I work the night shift so I write all night.

[Marie]

Excellent advice given to the reader in this succinct write, dear Jeyanthi... Thank you for sharing...

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you Marie !! 😀
I can be life coach sometimes expection mine , sometimes 😅

[Marie]

I think we women are all like that, dear Jeyanthi. Thank you...

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah 😀...

[Marie]

Smiles :)))