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A Poem by Jeyanthi
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Don't strive for it when
Kindness unserved belittle,
Lessons failed at young.

© 2024 Jeyanthi


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Jeyanthi
Can you find the positivity in this negative sentences 😅

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I had a pretty strict upbringing when it comes to respecting others, and putting others first, kindness can be our guide...Maybe we can eventually learn from mistakes...but a solid base (lessons when young) really help.
Oh my, I like this senryu.
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

Thanks for letting me know your thoughts on this haiku.
Yeah me too, my parents were/are str.. read more



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Pain from the youth is rough... the memories are at the very least distorted, but the feeling is still visceral. The very much absolute worst are pre verbal memories... it's very important to not f**k your kids up before age 5 -7... that's when we wire the base of our brain and create the foundation for our personality... but none of us really remember the actual memory, we just "remember" how the memory made us feel. If a child "remembers" something awful from that time in their life, it will help form the foundation of their personality... AND.... it's too far back to actually remember as an adult, so, there will be no real self introspection on that; "healing" is not really possible when the memories are pre verbal.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

I copy that..
Thanks for letting know your comments 🙂
Davidgeo

4 Months Ago

There should be a mandatory "parenting" class for teenagers. It should not be assumed "adults" know.. read more
I had a pretty strict upbringing when it comes to respecting others, and putting others first, kindness can be our guide...Maybe we can eventually learn from mistakes...but a solid base (lessons when young) really help.
Oh my, I like this senryu.
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

Thanks for letting me know your thoughts on this haiku.
Yeah me too, my parents were/are str.. read more
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A deep reflection in just a few words. The simplicity of the poem conveys a direct and powerful message about the consequences of our choices and the lessons unlearned throughout life.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

Yeah...
That's right ✅️
I second all this reviews....amazing advice

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

Thank you 😊 🙏
Good morning,
I always look at the glass half full rather than half empty...
For me that is the only way to live a happy life.
Lisasview, now in Spain

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

Good morning 🙏,
Yeah... half filled and can see the empty as space to get refilled...
read more
Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

@Snow...
I appreciate you !! 😃😃
Lisasview

4 Months Ago

You are most welcome!
Jey what was your inspiration for this, I liked it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave W.

5 Months Ago

Your response is also a nice poem as well. I just wrote a poem about the stars and time passing by t.. read more
Jeyanthi

5 Months Ago

Yeah 😀😀...
Have a Good sleep 😴 💤...
Here afternoon 🍛🥗
Dave W.

5 Months Ago

Actually I'm up all night I work the night shift so I write all night.
Excellent advice given to the reader in this succinct write, dear Jeyanthi... Thank you for sharing...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

5 Months Ago

I think we women are all like that, dear Jeyanthi. Thank you...
Jeyanthi

4 Months Ago

Yeah 😀...

Marie

4 Months Ago

Smiles :)))

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