Solitary

Solitary

A Poem by Jeyanthi
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Friends 🧡

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Her memories,
still freshly laid,
slowly untied.

Walking Reverse,
She was always
a friend of reach,
who treasured with
love and care,
Spilled unsaid secrets between,
Toyed ourselves to fun-ride,
She tricked me to bunk classes,
gone to laughing-heights,
lighted pranks where we go.
Became careless feathers.

Then third person gave
unwelcome entry,
egoism struck.
we parted into two.

That ever loved trustee,
went away long ago.
But left a lesson
to trust only within.

© 2024 Jeyanthi


Author's Note

Jeyanthi
One of my very old poem...
Submitting for the contest here ;)

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Nicely written. It tells a tale of friendship broken yet that had some true essence. Trust is a two way path, can't walk one way and expect it to work. So true, trust can make or break relationships. Thanks for sharing.

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Added on October 17, 2024
Last Updated on October 17, 2024
Tags: Friendship, broken promises

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Jeyanthi
Jeyanthi

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