Solitary

Friends 🧡

Her memories,
still freshly laid,
slowly untied.

Walking Reverse,
She was always
a friend of reach,
who treasured with
love and care,
Spilled unsaid secrets between,
Toyed ourselves to fun-ride,
She tricked me to bunk classes,
gone to laughing-heights,
lighted pranks where we go.
Became careless feathers.

Then third person gave
unwelcome entry,
egoism struck.
we parted into two.

That ever loved trustee,
went away long ago.
But left a lesson
to trust only within.

Author's Note

One of my very old poem...
Submitting for the contest here ;)

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

Nicely written. It tells a tale of friendship broken yet that had some true essence. Trust is a two way path, can't walk one way and expect it to work. So true, trust can make or break relationships. Thanks for sharing.

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah...
We were all there one way or other... don't we? 😅 just growing up feels soon 😅... hope she is doing well...
Thanks for the review and comments. Have a nice day!

A friend to all, is a friend to none. -Aristotle.. and I became one of that...

It takes lot of self love to become who I am now and trust myself.😅😇