💧 water

About current state.

Water cleans
It erases the dirt.
Dissovles in mud
to enrich.
Mixed in home
that been build.
Giving life
to our living.

Can we hold?
Can we trap in dam?

I come unannounced,
the nature calamities.
The houses fall,
surrounded by water
but not to drink,
leaving impact
for lifelong.

Flood says no place to go,
my channels are blocked,
Here, the path are cement block
were I ran,
the muddy roads are now
highway bridges.
There, mountains were crumbled,
trees were cut.
The soil lost the grip,
and fallen.
As I went down now,
But I can rise up too.
I warn you.


The earth tells
I can hold you
but not the plastic
you use.

Today becomes everyday
to save the tomorrow.

Author's Note

Random thoughts.. sorry for grammatical errors, i try to edit it... the poem is incomplete... if you have any thoughts on it please do share..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I love the ocean. I suicide board the big storms. I agree with your words dear poet. Water, we need and can be very dangerous for us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you 😊 🙏...
It's great to know that you work on the board, it does need broad thinking and empathy in them. ..

[Marie]

The many uses for water are finely explored in this poem. Nice work, dear poetess...

[Jeyanthi]

In our country... we are in hands of natural disaster...
Thank you for your review and comments 😊

[Marie]

Most welcome, Jeyanthi...

[emmajoygreen]

I would gladly review your writing but grammatical problems need to be correct; otherwise why use the language? What you want to say is vitally important but facts and thoughts are being obscured by certain flaws - that is very sad, Jeyanthi

[Jeyanthi]

Hi. I'm sorry. I am trying to learn the language usage. I will edit it. Sorry 😞

[emmajoygreen]

Please don't apologise, I was only trying to help by pointing out the need to focus on grammar. If you can find someone to help you it would be an advantage. Or, reading simple but good short stories would offer you examples, Jeyanthi.

[Jeyanthi]

Yeah. I'm trying to read books too, during free time. Thanks 😊 for your suggestion. Here, once upon a time a popular writer Alf was there, he used to correct my poem. He left writing here now. I just hope, he is fine. I check for his updates, but there is none. I understand the importance of language. Glad for pointing out my mistakes. 😇🥰

[emmajoygreen]

The person who tries hardest always succeeds and you most certainly will! You are already almost 'There'! Be happy.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you for encouraging words. It gives spark ✨️