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A Story by Jeyanthi
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She took half of the rice and boiled made to count still one more day.


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the purpose of this story is to remember to be thankful for girls. they're awesome. if a girl tried to boil rice for me i'd marry her, but there ain't no girls boiling half the rice for me! they just keep it to themselves! it's frustrating!

thanks for sharing this! it made me smile!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Years Ago

Thank you ... 🙂



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One of the best one liner poetry read so far. Left me in limbo and awe struck..

Posted 4 Years Ago


Jeyanthi

4 Years Ago

Thank you 🙂
Taking too much at one time leaves nothing for tomorrow. A valuable lesson and accomplished with great brevity.

Beccy.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Years Ago

Thank you 🙂
the purpose of this story is to remember to be thankful for girls. they're awesome. if a girl tried to boil rice for me i'd marry her, but there ain't no girls boiling half the rice for me! they just keep it to themselves! it's frustrating!

thanks for sharing this! it made me smile!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Years Ago

Thank you ... 🙂
A poem with wisdom. Enough rice for another day. Very nice use of words dear poet. I hope you are doing well and be safe.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeyanthi

4 Years Ago

Thank you... 🙂
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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Added on April 6, 2020
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Tags: Humanity

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Jeyanthi
Jeyanthi

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Writing heals me. I'm mother of two funny kids, nothing i can think of more. Beware, i can be so much friendly that you can't escape. 😅 Sending good vibes ✨️ if you left it.. more..

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