Wishing star

The star stole the light from me.
I become shadow.
The shadow that see
flaming agony everywhere,
Betrayal in happiness,
Shallow in love.
Tears are tasteless till last drop.
I fall hard on earth,
The gravity likes me a lot.

Earnestly I asked for forgiveness,
And wishing for the wishing star hopefully.

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

This is so good, I really enjoyed this write. nicely presented