They don't know

Holding Hope

Some stones are thrown,
they don’t know
You are building milestone.
Some nails claw to pierce,
they don’t know
You are tearing into new.
Some label you laughing stock,
they don’t know
You are clown in Rummy.
Some rejoice your fall,
they don’t know
You are weaving wings.
When life hits hard,
they don’t know
living becomes an art.

Reviews

[Aarti Sriram]

Impactful build up and construct Jeyanthi. I especially liked the laughing stock -Clown in rummy and life is art. To see opportunity and carve out a successful life in difficulties is in itself a trophy. Some lives get wasted who have plenty and cannot understand others taking time to grow from scratch. After growth and success they realise the potential in the person. Good luck and good wishes reaching such high points to you and all of us here, lovess

[Jeyanthi]

It's a process...
We must understand ourselves better than to understand what happening toread moreIt's a process...
We must understand ourselves better than to understand what happening to
us...
Thank you for your lovely thoughts and wishes.. ✨️🙏

[Marie]

I lOVE this beautifully penned poem, dear Jeyanthi. I love how you use the stones thrown to build a pathway away from those who threw them. Those who rejoice in one's fall will be surprised to see you flying high with your beautiful wings, soaring above them on the clouds of life close to the lovely warm sunshine. Yes, living life becomes an art, one which is learned through the hard times we endure. The wheel of life is always turning and one day, when least expected, these people will know exactly what it is like and how it feels to have stones thrown at them and they will be regretful for the harm they caused others through their unkind words. You capture life superbly in this sublime write, dear Jeyothi and I love it! Thank you so very much for sharing it with me this evening. I wish you a very lovely evening, blessed, pleasant and joyful. Enjoy!

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you for expressing your beautiful thoughts... your words are poetic and inspires us, like me to come up with many writings like this...
We write poem, but your review add essence to it...
I always remember your words dear Mam... thank you for your valuable time Marie and review too .. 😊 🙏✨️

[Jeyanthi]

You too have a wonderful day :)

[Marie]

MOST welcome always, dear Jeyanthi. Almost bedtime here in Ireland! Wishing you a very lovely evening too, dear friend...

[Ken Simm.]

There are some arts you simply must do. Because they are you and you are right, they don't know. And whats more sometimes I feel they never will. Excellent soul searching write.

[Jeyanthi]

Sometimes our art mock at us, we may feel confused what it implies but eventually we will know it.. where it's going...

Thank you Sir, for notifying this work.. so glad..
😀

[Jeyanthi]

Though fallen from my ancient work 2015.. 😅