Heart Strings

Holding myself to
End the lost fantasy.
Around you
Reveries are back
Tirelessly.
 
Still my hopes gliding
To near you.
Retouching  broken promises
In my heart.
Nestling chances to
Grip the once
Shattered relationship.

Author's Note

Consider this as a poetry. :P

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

What a picture you use as leader to your sadness, Jeyanthi! Does it mean the silence you feel emotionally because someone has become not a word or a look? However, whatever, this is such a sad and almost empty state of mind situation.. That said, your writimg shows a touch of defiance, a touch of YOU ready to wait it out and.. manage - managed somehow. God willing, you will, luv.

[Jeyanthi]

Yes dear... u found it ... it was written long back... where there were contest was quite popular in this WC site ... the pic violin , that too painted red conveying sorrow so I choosen it.. for acrostic poem..

Thank for your great comment, I hope I can get some sleep and bring back the lalala land...
sometimes we get lost ourselves, to come out in other way out...
Emma .. 😇😇

[emmajoygreen]

Your long time in here shows in your writing, Jayanthi! Sweet dreams.. .. ..

[Jeyanthi]

You found that too dear ... 😶‍🌫️.

We come up whenever one more title- Detective Emma.. 🙂

Wonderland dreams
But no thesaurus please.. 🙂😃

[emmajoygreen]

MUST must have my thesaurus - is my best friend - almost.

[Jeyanthi]

Truth ... 🙂

[Ankur Jain]

wow!
now that's nostalgia for you...:)
really sweet work of art Jeyanthi...doesn't have to look hard to detect your feelings...

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks Ankur. :)

[alf]

Hi Jeyanthi. Yes, I do consider this poetry, not just poetry but nostalgic, entreating and emotional poetry.
This was a delight to read, though of a sad nature, and left no doubt of your yearning, alf

[Jeyanthi]

Hi there, thanks for considering it as a poem, Alf. :) I used to write only too many silly things for a long time.