Heart Strings

Holding myself to
End the lost fantasy.
Around you
Reveries are back
Tirelessly.
 
Still my hopes gliding
To near you.
Retouching  broken promises
In my heart.
Nestling chances to
Grip the once
Shattered relationship.

Author's Note

Consider this as a poetry. :P

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

What a picture you use as leader to your sadness, Jeyanthi! Does it mean the silence you feel emotionally because someone has become not a word or a look? However, whatever, this is such a sad and almost empty state of mind situation.. That said, your writimg shows a touch of defiance, a touch of YOU ready to wait it out and.. manage - managed somehow. God willing, you will, luv.

[Jeyanthi]

Yes dear... u found it ... it was written long back... where there were contest was quite popular in this WC site ... the pic violin , that too painted red conveying sorrow so I choosen it.. for acrostic poem..

Thank for your great comment, I hope I can get some sleep and bring back the lalala land...
sometimes we get lost ourselves, to come out in other way out...
Emma .. 😇😇

[emmajoygreen]

Your long time in here shows in your writing, Jayanthi! Sweet dreams.. .. ..

[Jeyanthi]

You found that too dear ... 😶‍🌫️.

We come up whenever one more title- Detective Emma.. 🙂

Wonderland dreams
But no thesaurus please.. 🙂😃

[emmajoygreen]

MUST must have my thesaurus - is my best friend - almost.

[Jeyanthi]

Truth ... 🙂

[Marie]

A very poignant write complemented by a superbly suitable graphic. The violin standing alone speaks volumes. A broken relationship which haunts still is finely penned, as is the desire to be near the person you once thought the world of and also filled with hope to rekindle the old flame which once burned like lava from a volcano! Feelings finely expressed too. I love this poem, dear Jeyanthi and I, thank you for sharing it with me this evening. Lovely work!!! Well done...

[Jeyanthi]

The burning desire can be there untill there is rain or else fall as ashes...
Your comment comes as poetry itself.. ✨️
Thank you dear.. you are so kind 😇

[Marie]

Most welcome always, Jeyanthi...

[Pete]

sad yet hopeful as it truly does tug at heart strings.

[Jeyanthi]

Yes... sometimes it whines without tuning it right..
thank for your comments 🙏 😊..
read moreYes... sometimes it whines without tuning it right..
thank for your comments 🙏 😊..

Hope you have a great days ahead...

[Antifranticbabydoll]

This writing shows the sadness inside. Something we all experience at least once in our lives.
Thank you for writing, keep up the good work.

[Jeyanthi]

Did you?
Thank you dearest!!

(For some this can be , default song 🎵 😂)

[Ken Simm.]

This melody is beautifully sad.

[Jeyanthi]

A violin can do that.. 😅

Thank you ....

[Arundass TP]

Excellent emotions and feelings in this poem. Good work

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you... 🙂

[Soren]

Lovely use of wording to portray a shattered heart. Loved it.

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks for the comment and reviews... 🙂

Now, it can reach many views ..😅

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, this is poetry. Really nice work with this one. I like it. Rating it 100#

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks.... :D

[Shubham Joshi]

This is a poetry... which is beautiful, written well by you and enjoyed well by me.

[Jeyanthi]

Thank you!!! :)

[samanthaashley_]

this is great :) definitely some strong poetry!

[Jeyanthi]

Thanks.... :D