She's a Vampire

I don't like the show itself, but bronie culture is rather intresting, so I watched the series and began making fan art.

I have not seen her eyes,

or does she hide them,

Her flesh has not seen the sun,

Or would it harm her?

Such a mystery,

a curiosity,

is she the same mare I've come to know?

Octavia, my dear,

On this you must,

you must stay very clear,

you keep diggin,

you'll find the answer,

but then can to take on the monster?

She is very inquisitive,

it's kind'a annoying,

but she can't know the secret,

it would destroy her!

Please don't follow me, 

I cannot let you see,

Please Ocie, listen to me,

Stay away!

Octavia my dear,

on this you must stay very clear,

you keep diggin,

you'll find the answer,

but then can you take on the monster?

Oh my goodness it's true,

they exist,

I can't fight it,

Can't resist,

Now I'm bitten,

Now I'm smitten,

As we play one two,

on every full moon.

Reviews

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I love Vamps and this poem!!!!

[L.L. Lily]

I agree with Emily this got my attention right away. And I'm a huge fan of vampires :D but somehow I feel that this could be a story too maybe you can give it a shot. Thanks for sharing it :P

[Lily]

That's an idea, I'll try at it, and when I finish it, I'll send you a mail. Thanks for the idea.

[L.L. Lily]

No problem :3 Can't wait to read it :)

[Lily]

I'm working on it now.

[Lily]

by the way, if I'm to send you mail. we need to be friends, but I've finished the story, I added a special thanks to you in the description. it is in it's first draft, and I'm open to criticism. Thanks!

[Emily]

You got my attention right away! Good Job!

[dw817]

And a poem about a vampire is a unique thing indeed. Slight spelling error, "dose" to "does."
The curiosity is, is the narrator Octavia or a different person narrating altogether ?

[Lily]

Both Octaia and a character named Vynly, thanks for the check over, guess I can always count on you to proofread my stuff, hu?

[dw817]

Pretty Well, Angel. :) Also the name Octavia is Italian meaning, "Born 8th."

[Lily]

Yep, I know, but they are characters from the show. I mentioned in note for the readers, I do not enjoy the show, but the bronie culture, which is males who like my little pony, is rather interesting.

[dw817]

Boys who like My Little Pony ? Umm ... Words fail me. :)

[Lily]

Funny, my friend is actually obsessed with my little pony and showed me fan art. A lot of it is rather amusing.

[dw817]

Well I like Tinkerbell and Barbie movies so - maybe I'm not too far from. :7

[Lily]

Yep, his brother makes fun of him for it, and then he pointed out that hasbro made transformers and my little pony and that he was basicly a bronie because they have the same basic plot.

[dw817]

I guess I'll have to sit down sometime and watch an episode of My Little Pony. :)

[Lily]

Its not that bad of a show really, just not as good as some other shows, and I only seem to watch it when there isn't much on.