Why She's so concerned about me

everybody experience love but only few understands what it is.

Why she's so concerned about me

you must know.

When I told I'm in love with another woman,

she hardly believed

thought that it was just another funny joke

she looked confident

but something was in my eyes, in my voice

she was afraid

came closer, holding my hands looking at me

her face turned pale

she asked me, don't you love me any more?

What could I say

Emm, I did but I don't, I mean at least not now,

she remained silent

she was crying aloud, tear shedding like hell

cried all the night

murmuring all the night blaming her own fate

nothing about me,

stood up in the morning, kissed me and asked

do you love her?

Emm, yes I do, I mean of course I do.

Walked away slowly

looked back and said goodbye, take care

be happy in your life,

she looked back again, again and again, as if

she don't wish to go

I could see tears glittering in her eyes

I was happy, was I?

Why she's still so concerned about me

you must know.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"she remained silent

she was crying aloud, tear shedding like hell

cried all the night

murmuring all the night blaming her own fate

nothing about me,"

In the quiet silence, questions are asked. Tears are shed. Concerns are offered. Murmurings are whispered. Do you still love her...A splendid read and write...:)..................

[Jewel Chanda]

thanks sami.. for your review...love is really strange... certainly multifaceted...

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)..............

[New Theory]

A beautiful poem, Love is quiet the most funniest and strangest emotion never rationalized.

[Vidya Bacchus]

A very sad poem true.Love is an emotion that can lift us or break us.

[Jewel Chanda]

you are right indeed..

[Vidya Bacchus]

.................:)

[KassidyBaker12]

Such a sad, heart breaking poem. I really love how you explain the inner emotion of Emm. I can imagine what she looked like, so confused and hurt, but not willing to say a word.

I really enjoyed it :)

[Jewel Chanda]

Thanks Kassidy...