Fighting A Losing Battle

Fighting A Losing Battle

A Poem by jumbie's #1 fan
"

There's somethings in life that I want so bad!

"

Fighting A Losing Battle

 

Here I am once again

Lying in my bed thinking of you

I know I shouldn’t be

But it’s not that easy

Every time I close my eyes

It’s your face that appears before mine

I can’t get you out of my head

And if I could, would I?

No, not in a million years

So I’ll sit here and wipe away my own tears

Hoping, wishing, and praying to God

That you could be mine

It might not align with His will

But I want you still

Please God, grant me this one request

Even if he’s not the best

I can’t stop loving him

I can’t fight these feelings anymore

I'm fighting a losing battle

And surrendering now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 jumbie's #1 fan


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Ebs
wow. really cool. I liked it. the emotion was clear and rich. I so understand what your saying through this piece. Awesome work. Never stop writing!!

ebs

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow...this brings out such a powerful emotion
You've got raw talent, there is no denying that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Aww that is a really sad peice.
i really enjoyed reading it. so far on this site i have only read a few peices that really struck me, and this is one of them, i congratulate you!

Posted 16 Years Ago


omg
I know how this feels...

"Delight yourself in the Lord and he will give you the desires of your heart. "
For some reason I thought of that...yeah, I guess I'm kind of weird...but this poem was...how do I say it? aah, it just really hit an emotional spot in me ^_^
and yeah, from what I see, you do delight in Him, and (although I'm saying the same Harry said, I do mean it ^_^) I really do hope for the best for you. =)

Posted 16 Years Ago


*tear*
awwww i hope the best for you

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 28, 2008
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