I'm Hoping You're Not

Guys: Don't be that guy. Girls: Don't fall for that guy.

   I’m Hoping You’re Not

 

 

 

I’m hoping you're not that guy

To pry open my heart

Shredding and ripping out the insides

I’m hoping you're not that guy

Who will use me

Abuse me

To the point of wanting to die

I’m hoping you're not that guy

Trying to take away my life

Continuously stabbing my flesh over and over with a dull knife

I’m hoping you’re not that guy

Who laughs when I cry

Smirking at each tear that falls from my eye

I’m hoping you’re not that guy

To claim that you love me

When all you want is sex really

I’m hoping you're not that guy

Who makes me feel worthless

That if I killed myself, say I wouldn’t be missed

I’m hoping you're not---

 

 

 

 

Wait.

        Who am I fooling?

        You are that guy.

 

Digging my grave

Until I say my final

Goodbye.

 

 

 

Reviews

[UpComesDown]

sounds like one of my ex's... sad... but a great job.... intense most definitely

[Juan]

No I'm not that guy, I didnt do anything,you didnt see anything and you cant prove a thing..j/k..As you may have heard already..lol this is one poem that is drenched in some seriously intense emotions.Great job of making me want to hit that guy :)

[Jacky Bones]

Oh burn
what can i say
i love girls girls girls
girls i do adore

[Dani California]

Whoa! This is intense...!
and wait,
I know that guy!! lol

Seriously,
this is fantastic!
It flows perfectly,
and its content is raw... felt.

Great job! I'll have to read more
of your work...

and HEY! I see you live in Hawaii. Me too! lol
Hey neighbor! Which island?

Ok, back to the poem...

Excellent!! :)