What it makes a good poem for people

I came to know it depends on person
But a universal poem would be something like
National song such as vandemataram janaganamana
Christmas i mean festival songs
Like bhathakamma songs bonalu songs

If you know the person specific song to their like

But for me what makes me a good poem is
A sincere blame or praise for what i am

For few a falsepraise cools them byt for me it is not

I know one person who is like doesnt know who he is what he is shat his limits are whathis dreams

For him i write this poem
Oh my lord
Wherever you are you arenot far from me
How a humming burd gets food fod his new born
I rise get the hay done to pray you shower you feed you and make uou sleep
Oh my lord this is how i adore you

For the love lust i am just you always inside me you are
Shiv + aham its you and me.

We lived like radha krishna
We married like vasudev and rukhmini
You treated me as your wife sho approached you like parvathy
Like brahma you wrote my fate with my hands of saraswathi

Why i always compare with god myself and you only to make us better individuals though how evil we might be in tge hands of otgers we just refine ourselves to be good and god.

We dIaily pluck lotus and put at feet of my motger goddess only as a szcrifice of being good and accept me as your beloved.

And you get me that flower from mud water for me we both pray to mother tk protect in tough time mzke us walk through


Who you are really my man to me
Chathur bhuha
With great beard
And jap maala
A warrior writer wild
To seek me you fight with a pen as you become wild.
Me being protected by you i read you as i see you in my body as my love sex bee 24/7 over my core.


Jessy Jacob
People wakes up from our blissful love only to make us sleep again in our blissful love hug.

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