My first trial of his poetry

The wind with its fragrant breeze, 

leaves on trees buzzling with with sweet noise

there birds singing their voces, kuhooo, kuhooo

the river flowing anxious and dying to merge in sea 

sea waiting with untiring tides, at the shore for the river to take in

the calm beach in early morning sun, where ships are sailing 

the other side in a beautiful home, morning prayers are offered, with music of lord, 

aroma oozing out of nice coffee, and there she is being called by him, hey where is my coffee,

where are my glasses, where are is my watch, where is my shoe mom, all busy hussle, voices 

there in a beautiful room, with book in her hands, sitting on a chair with full of memories and smile in her heart, 

with portrays of my family on walls, sun rays falling on her forehead, with a sip of coffee, calls. hey Rani, 

are you making what for breakfast, do you need any help, No amma she replies back... 

this is just a beautiful day in that home, everyday it goes, with all sounds things here and there me running here and there... 

maybe i look old thought full but this is my dream passion life for me. 

hope you all liked my poem, 

jessy jacob,

it needs a heart to love, but it needs a family to live happily ever, what is there in loneliness, never you find such medley love... 

Reviews

[Jibey]

A beautiful dream... from a romantic and loving heart..
The poem flows well, like a stream... warm, like a lover's kiss

[JessyJacob]

like a hug in his arms, a secured love of parents, mild tease of her sisin, cute yell of kids, all these make beautiful experiences, where a right flowers make a costly bouquet of memory in hearts of everyone.

[JessyJacob]

tank you for your praise.