Here my first haiku!!

Happy international haiku day!!

My first 3 haikus

An old deep
Sea, tides at the shore
Both swim across
to unknown. In their
travel to deep middle
sea there lies their home

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Last line extra

A daisy smiles
At the mosquitoe which
Thinks it bites
But poor it is flies off on
Seeing bee her only love

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He is the sun i
The core rays which
Emanate from both
shower the earth with light
Hope which guides lives making happy

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Jessy jacob
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