why do you want to hurt him?

why do you want to hurt him, you have been with him, though left him, i gave a chance to be with him, still you are not satisfied and want to separate us, blocking me. 

I gave you one more chance and told you how to get him and you got him and enjoyed life with him, now please can i be with him, for rest of my life. 

I beg you, i am seeing you, you are again hurting him, for no reason, you have touched him, spent with his physical, though i didn't get a chance to see him for a decade where you have been all these days. 

Though we were together 4 yrs, we never spoke or talked that much like how you have been with him. 

Please i request don't hurt him with your messages or poems or calls. Just be nice to him, and you are a good soul if you want to be. 

I am just seeking him for what he is I adored lord Krishna in this soul path and in my previous births, at least i got a chance to see him and be with him in this life. you have spent enough with him, i am just waiting for him, i need him, i want to be with him at least for my rest of travel path. 

Why you aren't satisfied. what else you need. I always wanted in a better way so that it doesn't hurt him and me. I did whatever though i lost most of the time with him and my son, at least now i want to spend with him. so please stop hurting him and give him to me, i have to say that you give him to me because you are stopping him from being with me. If you remember in 2016, i left you both be happy and i went to Turiya but didn't die and got back as people doesn't want me to leave my body. Why can't you give same boon for me too. i just ask you again. Please give his rest of the life to be with me. I sincerely request you and beg your pardon if at all i hurt you in any corner, i know i have hurt you so many times for the things which you have done me hurting with physical pain mentally. 

I am sorry i don't mean anything wrong, i just did what is right for me. 

So please don't hurt him again and just be nice to him and to me. 

Thank you, Alaa. 

Regards, 

Jessy Jacob. 

Reviews

[JayG]

Well, you did send a read request...

This is a letter from you, someone the reader knows nothing about, to someone unknown, who has done unknown things that the speaker is complaining about, for unknown reasons.

What's in it for the reader? Why would the reader want to know more about two strangers?

People come to poetry to be entertained — to be made to care and feel, not nod and say, "Uhh...okay."

So instead of telling the reader how YOU feel, make the READER feel.

At the moment, in your posted work, you're talking TO the reader without supplying the context thatwould make it meaningful to them.

To fix that, I suggest you take a look at Mary Oliver's, A Poetry Handbook. The lady is brilliant, and the book a fun read. And, you can download a copy from the site linked to below (though it's not readable on a phone).

https://yes-pdf.com/book/1596

[JessyJacob]

Dear Jay, i do understand your concern i dont have the person in my friends list, to send it for read request, so i just forwarded the person whom i am saying not to hurt.
I do agree with you we write readers to feel, i am not efficient poet to describe in a milder melodoius way, i do write prose precisely, and getting better on poetry.
my intention was only to send direct to people and understand me.

regards,
Jessy Jacob,
a purple heart.