He touched where he cant even trespass

Another day of valentines a special he made it

He feels a fledgling to touch there as
She seeks for the bruises he doesnt leave on her
Touhes as if what they intended for like a baby
As he thinks i am longing for

She stays quiet wants to talk low voice so that he could hear only of hers

She just watches him succumb his savor as like nectar that acts sanjeevani to everyones suffering

She digs into her to give rise to a free bird that they give rise to every second and
they do it every second lying in on and stay together

He likes her natural ways how she treats him
She never complains for his ways though a kid or a man.

Reviews

[keith]

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an eye catching and thought provoking title

'Touhes as if what they intended for like a baby
As he thinks i am longing for'
an image well described

well done in thought and with some patience easily deciphered
(i'm guessing english is not your 1st language ... none the less all one needs is patience and open interpretation)

[JessyJacob]

Hi Keith, thats nice to hear from you, praising my simple lines, and ultrasoftness of thoughts, its been a long time to receive a praise, inspires me and motivates me to write more. Yes its not 1st language, but improved communication skill as he thought me and he doesnt want too much verbiage so a little grammar and lay man language i am writing. Still waiting with patience only, longing to see him, i dont think he looks same as in pic, want to see face to face and talk and walk and smile for his funny expressions and jokes.

jessy jacob,
a purple heart.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it's a romantic piece about being 'touched' which does not always mean physically. good stuff.

[Dave W.]

It's very intimate, I felt like I walked in on something meant to be kept private. Good poem thank you for sharing.

I hope you get your hearts desires, I hope the best for you.