my SONIA - my sister in law!

my SONIA - my sister in law!

A Story by JessyJacob

Dear honey
i am so proud of you, 
you kept your charm so well 
you are light in house,
you controlled the shake of pillars in house,
you are my dearest sania. 
let you sail in family house together everyone including the big boss. 

© 2024 JessyJacob


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It sounds as if Sonia helped to keep stability in the house, when she "controlled the shake of pillars in house"? Or, helped to manage incidents of instability? And, an inspiring "light" to those in her presence? With charm too, she seems very close to the writer of this piece. Curiously though, it's described as a story; just below the title. Perhaps, it should better be referred to as a poem? After all, it's generally acceptable these days; that poetry doesn't have to rhyme or even be in verses. Thanks for sharing these fond feelings of Sonia, with us.

Posted 1 Month Ago


She's a lovely young lady. Clearly, you have good reason to be proud of her.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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JessyJacob

3 Months Ago

She is, thank you. Today is Rakshabhandan i know she willl have good time with my husband. I need to.. read more
What a nice tribute to Sonia. The warmth of your own heart shows through in your writing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


JessyJacob

6 Months Ago

Thamk you.....
A fine piece of writing today, Jessy. Hope it will be both a blessing to think of your sister-in-law and your gentle words travelling with the picture. Wishing you a smiling Sunday.

Posted 6 Months Ago


JessyJacob

6 Months Ago

Thank you....

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