That night never happened till now.....

I and you together see from near, touch each other 

and sleep together it never happened till now that night

how could any girl wish for her man hug atleast, you didnt even

bid farewell with that neither a hand touch or a pat..

how could any girl doesnt want to sleep in his arms holding him tightly 

for his hug and kiss on forhead atleast, neither a kiss on her lips...

how could any lady wished to spend whole night with her man atleast in 

her life time on this earth for they bonded in love for together for eons of time.....

how could she want to smell his body from near atleast though never had a chance to 

hold and touch his and kiss him on his fractured wrist.... 

how could she wanted to touch and heal his bumped lip for the ball that hit him, atleast

she could see him in his pic.....

how could any lady wants to dance with a ball dance or a a bolllywood dance steps atleast

for they could be together in the bonds of love forever in the knots of wedding....

how could share a sip of his drink with him in the night atleast,

though he likes to drink with her and pour on her lips and force her to drink.....

atleast she wants to see him once more before her life ends....

Author's Note

Reviews

[The Unknown Sith]

A nice read and a good flow. I like this.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you for your review. I was thinking noone will drop review.

[The Unknown Sith]

Ya, don't let this site be an indicator of your talent.

[JessyJacob]

yo didnt understand my intention, you are just misunderstanding me, i just want some constructive feed back or a normal review, but it is something to improve our skills too, i have seen many people comments on others work, but noone normally commnets on my work except one or two, so i just wanted people to chat with me, as they are isolating me it seems i felt, you ae being friendly within your own groups and few people around. dont think otherwise.

[JessyJacob]

by the way i am 1% when i see your writings,, i am niowhere.

[JessyJacob]

The above lines looks like a womb of a pregnant lady, i didnt realise until i finished writing,

Even when blood was coming out from injury of Annamayya's hand , it drew like shanka chakra on the ground,,,,

thats the power of will that God makes it happen without looking for result, you perform your deed which is explained as Karma yoga in Bhagvad Gita.

Hope the Ancient rock understand with more clarity now, a writer in this cafe...

[JessyJacob]

so many reviews and people comment for no reason, why my poems doesn tlook attractive as they are, do i need to modify atleast that should be a review right or worng??? I am waiting for reviews like this guy in this movie song above, hero waiting for malakalu from the seeds in his field.

I think there should be incentive that whoever give more reviews they get some thing, then they might write on my wall,,, i will recommend this to WC chief...