My first crush the style

He walked by hall by opening the door, with a style, back pack on shoulders, suddenly i looked to the door side as i was walking in hall way, who is this guy so styling like hollywood star, within  a sec, is this guy, whom i am seeing daily, why he is loking so different today I  thought he must be special, i was flattened by the style, the hair style, and look really amazing. 

later on he made me to fall in his arms with his first kiss, first touch, missing moment, coming close to me as if to touch but dont want to touch, hurted so many times, felt like why you are stopping yourself, i was missing that feeling, when he is going to touch me again, he just did once like that, actually he does to make me miss and long for it. 

I wish i could write more nicely, but will try. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Writing is never-ending effort to be better. I use to go to Writer's workshops weekly. I received good advice from published writers. Covid closed them down. The English language is tricky. I learn at the workshops. Less period and more comma. I believe. Conversation is the hardest part of writing. We need to read the Jack London type writers. I like your writing. It is honest and meaningful. Every poem, I write. They will need a deep edit before I publish someday.
Coyote

[JessyJacob]

hi, thank you for your review. i am stil working on improving writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are doing fine. Mastering English is very difficult. I am still learning and I am 64 years old. Your poetry is meaningful and you are welcome.

[JessyJacob]

thank you I juat want little grip so that i can express my feelings as much i can.

[Coyote Poetry]

I read non-stop. I believe if we read. We understand the language better. And you are welcome.

[JessyJacob]

when i start reading a book, i look at first page or a prologue, then last page thats all and when i start reading whole book it loses interest and stops me in reading, so i am left with gist as i dont have time, but when i make time it never happens i just finished only one novel till now during my bachelors, and never after that i read only palm books which are short. So no grip and better control over writing.

[JessyJacob]

Everytime i see in a stylish look, i fall for him to see him again and again, on this weekend also i saw his smile what a smile he has, cant explain. I really saw him how i wanted to see him, not a like anormal person but a different guy with all good things and stylish star, never feels inferior to himself.