You are not complaining!

I thought you are complaining, when you were talking about

her, she is good though she is not good, in a different way,

Now i know about her, you are not right, but it never bothered me, 

it might have bothered someone i thought. so i said about you, 

so dont do something wrong again, here i am waiting for you to return, 

atleast i could save you from doing one more wrong, is the motto for me

to make you loved i did always bear everything, i was bearing and you were 

bearing me, i know you know me, we talked to each other yesterday

dont do something wrong to another family. I plead you it will hurt you 

only, its not needed to hurt one more , this will be third, after that there is no

anything.

Reviews

[Stuart Munro]

Fantastic poetess and poem ,

[JessyJacob]

Thank you for your kind review.

[Pete]

you are clearly upset about something. doing wrong to hurt someone is never a good thing nor is complaining. complaining is unsettled unhappiness about something and should be dealt with directly in a calm, reasonable, mature manner.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you, sure you are correct should be dealt in calm. Is it mean no reactions but just ignore let their deeds make them understand?? If that is the case human brain intelligence is of no use then but instead letting them know their mistakes in a more clear way will be better way. I had done both ways and there was no change in people’s reactions, hence it means fault is with personnel who doesn’t want to change but prove their mistakes as correct, for such no one can make them realize because they think there are only three legs for their cat. Hence I stopped from now on not to think of such mistakes and time will teach them. I am not hurting anyone I do hurt myself for other’s mistakes and people take advantage of me and do god had made them realize their mistakes with in their life with same mistakes happening to them. Hence no regrets dharam will protect yourself when you protect dharma when you don’t it will ruin you.

[Pete]

i agree, many can't/won't ever change. the difficulty is for those of us tolerating them and waiting for time to teach them if ever ... :)

[JessyJacob]

I’m in complete agreement with you. Thank you for your reply.

[Neville]

I am glad I stopped by .. this introduction to your ink reads oh' so sad though .. I Hope I can find a happy post from you .. Neville

[emmajoygreen]

Your words are smothered in a layer of sadness and agitation.. you poor woman. That said, you've laid out your thoughts and perhaps seeing them in front of you is a help, at least a weak remedy? What has happened is like scourge, leaves terrible scars. Pray you can end up smiling, contented, you deserve to.

[JessyJacob]

thank you for understanding me.

[JessyJacob]

i dont want to say anything to you, thanks.

[FGFRANKLIN]

And what good would complaining do? None, I say. But confronting any problem is always the first step to correcting it. We have to admit and recognize something is wrong, after all, if we are going to make an effort to fix it. And not everything can be fixed. We can change a tire if it's flat. We can change the restaurants we frequent if we don't like the menu. We can even change ourselves. But we can't change others. Like the line from a Clint Eastwood movie, "A man's got to know his limitations." I'd venture everyone should remember those limitations exist for all of us. I enjoyed the read. F.

[JessyJacob]

i agree. Thanks for reading Frank.

[Betty Hermelee]

Don't complain .. it's not a good thing to do....and try not to hurt anyone either.... I think that's what you mean, but it was a little confusing.... Nice wordage, kind of stream of conscientiousness.....
keep going Jessy!
Best, B

[JessyJacob]

Complaining some people bear, some not, why to hurt one who cant and take it negatively. Life is a maze, who bears the confusion and clears it are the happiest survival, living is not a life when you cant take it for happy and enjoy the complain, which is a routing banter he plays on everyone equally. Some take it and some cant. Thank you Betty, i love you, do keep reviewing my work.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!
Best, B

[W. Barrett Munn]

I like how you've handled this message. It is disjointed but in a good way. I think that off-balance feeling of the poems matches the off-balance feeling of the narrator. Very interesting.

Winston

[JessyJacob]

This message could have been done in 2016 itself, then you didnt dared, it took so much time for it, if beauty holds in beholder still holds good then i feel you will be ecstatic hopefully happy.

[W. Barrett Munn]

If I might offer advice? When you post do not use chapter or story unless you are writing prose.
Readers tend to skip longer reads but yours is in my opinion poetry and that is how I think you should describe it.

[JessyJacob]

Sorry, it is chapter of poetry in a book, So not my mistake, you have to understand. Your advice taken, i will rename the book as book of poems.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Ah, that makes sense.
What you can do us list it as poetry then in comments explain further.

Winston

[JessyJacob]

ok dear winston.

[Tom]

Sound, worldly wise advice, this man is dancing with the devil when real love is to be found with his longstanding, forgiving wife..

Pensive, poetic, nicely penned!

[JessyJacob]

I really missed my man’s love. Any husband should forgive his wife for his love over her. I still stay here as his wife forever manasakalyanam is already done. We are married for eatenity today, no one can separate our bhandan. It doesn’t matter where he is dancing always he comes back home, for he is her ❤️😍🤗and man for her. I miss you my hubby.