Inner Beauty

When you decided to go with someone it is better not to stop you,

i didnt stop you then and now also I will not stop you. 

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

I like the way you manipulate syntax into more musical phrasing: “and now also I will not stop you” is so much more pleasant sounding than “and I won’t stop you now,” which is how it will most likely be spoken in everyday language.

Winston

[JessyJacob]

i dont manipulate, i just say what my heart says, it will sound true, then it looks more manipulative if i think and write. Thank you and glad it sounded good for you,

[W. Barrett Munn]

I mean manipulated in the most positive sense, in the way Robert Frost arranged words within a sentence for best effect.

Winston

[JessyJacob]

ok, sorry for missunderstanding, thank you, i just write for Him, to know what i feel about him, i am not good at english, very simple words i use like a 10 yrs kid writes, still my writings make you feel to relate and musical i feel glad to make you to touch your heart, i feel elated and thank you for encouragement.

[W. Barrett Munn]

I am impressed that you can write poetry in a second language. I cannot.

Winston

[JessyJacob]

no, English is my third language, first is my mother tongue, secind hindi(national language) and third english, so poor in english as learnt simple grammar than that in telugu,

[JessyJacob]

i know yours is first language English.

[JessyJacob]

no vocaub nor writing we have lessongs or assignments, looks you started writign from 10yrs, very knowledgeable you are as you invested so much time in improving.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Very impressive in a third language.
You might research Ezra Pound and his idea about the imagism style of poetry.

[W. Barrett Munn]

Or research haiku poetry. These styles may help you get started.

[JessyJacob]

i was just googling about this poet, nice to know will read his poetry. Thank you for suggesting, but i am learning from you so much how to write so nicely, but someitmes your imaginations are too many to catch imaginations, i just try to understand whatever i can from your writings.

[JessyJacob]

Nice to know the haiku rules, will try but my problem is vocaub, i have to keep thesaurus beside to find words, i never look into dictionary, but to read yours i use dictionary, collins, and google to find the slangs what they actually mean, I never focussed on english as i thought it is least in fetching a career, but you are natural writer with inborn talent, so you write very well.

[W. Barrett Munn]

There is nothing wrong about using dictionaries or a thesaurus to write-it helps you learn. But the best way to learn how to write poetry is to read poetry. Good luck.

[JessyJacob]

ok will do, but i like to read rather than writing, writings of poet like you makes me curious in reading your work, i write for letting my feelings out, but for that also i need to learn how to write, will read poetry as you mentioned.

[JessyJacob]

I will still be waiting for you here till beyond death. You will see the difference between real and hallucinations of my reactions. you can simulate the reactions, but real life cannot, its mixed emotions how can you feel that mind hallucinations would be the same thing, i have invested my life here, i know how to handle my life for my beliefs, right from beginning the commitment driven me, and this will also drive me with hope, all my previous who loved me truely have turned back to me knowing about me, who sacrificed me for you, that you are going to come for me, and definitely you are coming back to me.