Jessy with her only Man!!!

A poem with him, A combination of his lines and my lines how they merges, a first try

From the deepest emotions

I arise with a hope for her

thinking she might born for him again

 

She nowhere got smote with other

waiting at deep waves in the middle of ocean, 

as her tears got wiped as if she is not crying but 

looking for that man who is within her

 

when are you showing your face

oh my scarecrow wakeup 

a big strom maybe out there,

cant leave you alone here in the deep tides which may 

throw you away for a life time

 

with my heart in her hand

here I am, I am just waiting 

you to call me, so that 

we both go to never ever land forever

 

Promise my man this time

never leave this Alice in Wonderland,

all mysteries out we need to stop 

dreaming each other again

 

Wish all our dreams come true on

this green planet or Mars

I am waiting here to hold 

your hand tightly 

 

With love Jess & Jac. 

 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

a lovely dream especially with your man... to someplace really special like our planet or mars... this poem show much hope for people who are a bit depressed and want an escape.
Nice!
Best, Betty

[JessyJacob]

Usually people dream to make it true, but it’s true love, hope always works in making dream true. Writing for me is not for escape but to share feelings with others and make me stronger. Thank you for stopping by Betty, really appreciate your support and reading my writing for your kind comments.

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Jessy
Best, B

[JessyJacob]

Hope you are doing good dear Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

And same to you!

[JessyJacob]

I am doing good spent with my dear Eshaa, and reg charges I am fine I might need to go little charges. Tell about your health dear ammaa(dear Betty in my native language).

[William Michael Reeves]

I hope you made it to never ever land with your man in hand. A Stranger In A Strange Land was from Mars where ancient water flowed to alien shores of sand. So here on your poetic beach I stand ready to read your thoughts that have spanned literary classics and with you we follow the yellow brick road to Oz, a wonderful land!

Billigami

[JessyJacob]

Thank you for your review. Do appreciate you visiting my lines and writings.

[lightsong]

This is really sweet Jessy, a song of hope and happy love, I like to play with fonts too, but this one is a little hard to read.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you for your, review, glad it looked sweet for you, not a bit in your way of writing with sensual touch, but i couldnt imagine with too many nicer words and descriptions. I changed the font, hope it is looking good now.

[lightsong]

Sure the font is better now :>

You are welcome my friend~

[Lisasview]

First read of your Jessy and I do like your thoughts.
May I suggest that you work on punctuation and spelling.
This could be a good and strong poem if you just work on it.
For example: nowhere is one word, not two.
The w in Wonderland needs to be capitalized.
And, I think you left a word out after out….
Maybe out there?
I hope you do not take offense to my suggestions.
If so then just ignore them.
Lisa, now in Spain

[JessyJacob]

I will correct the grammar mistakes and the missing word maybe if you say so. I maybe right I’m not missing a maybe as you say so, maybe. Thank you for kind review no wonder I am not good at English but maybe not at intent. There is no offense I may not take your maybe as you are reviewing my maybe comment. Haha, I just tried a funny way to make smile on your face 😀, as you do so in others. Hope you are safe out there. Take care of yourself.
Jessy.