Hi Jess , hello...!!!!

A call/sound waves rejuvenates thy soul! A smile, gave never ending love, which is forver, with a blank space, who can write over or delete if it has to be used, will remain as blank ceheque/Kamadhenu

A call been answered

saying hi, hey

do you miss me

No, why should I 

Nobody cares any wishes

they give for the whole year/life.

 

Note: Being sorry to Him, for not recognizing his voice, how it changed the sine waves of Sound. 

Globe(earth) is moving around moon(man)

as if moon is rotating 

around the earth(woman).

Note: I reversed because positive is becoming negative, in real life too. Scared of you mother, why are you hurting me? A prayer to mother Goddess. 

Never know what we

need, but i know what we

need, a life just,

Which parents gave

and we promised parents that

we will live and show our smile

But we are trying to sustain as

Ok and ran away in life till end,

He says however tough/risky it may get

We need to stick to Righteousness

with brave and confidence eyes.

Note: A farewell for some gap of time was given by Him by saying all the lines above in a single smile on His face to Her. That single second smile also is worth watching to adore Him. Not yet found till, how much light rays need to travel inside soul to be together again.  

Dry leaves, looking for life gain. 

People also needs to care 

one, who stands for you

But we missunderstand 

what he is doing right or wrong

Note: But it is totally mesmerised, who is standing for whom, I have my clarity to stand for my man, and my son, even though you did wrong, he was ready to accept, but with limited chances. For me, it is never ending trust, just to make them happy. A total love but not withering hate. 

Everyother can apply to this lines. 

We just cant love anybody

untill it hurts us and surrounding  

Then we need to be righteous

in selecting path, bidding sorry

to the one who stood but did wrong. 

Start a new hope with rising sun

ready to face even if it throws

a stone, a lemon, a flower,

we know what to do with those 3 things

If Stone, stop it before hurting

Lemon, a lemonade and use it whatever 

it can offer, With flower, you give

freshness, with sweet fragrance. 

Note: Yes entwined dance, orbiting thier own paths of earth and moon. Those 3 things are S-embarrasing/hating comment, L-a little praise, when thrown negatively, side trap/talk, F- Love from the person, whom you are caring and give again a chance, when he needs. 

Author's Note

These are true feelings, just dont think they are worthless, can do anything for Him. Writing can only be encouraged, where it gives clarification, inspiration, and love. Not for time pass feelings, where it diverts from people from their path. A sincere request to budding youth.

Reviews

[Octavia]

"That single second smile also is worth watching to adore Him."

I really liked this line. Are you writing about a god or a man? I suppose it really doesn't matter, because either way it is obvious how much the writer loves Him. I am drawn to your description of the earth and moon orbiting each other, entwined like a dance.

Lovely work.

[JessyJacob]

I am writing about a God who born as Human, yes it is not obvious, but when you see him as man, we fight for simple miseries. It is true entwined like a dance. He has been adored so much when he was treated as man, more than God, even little mistakes were looked as just silly. But when I started treating him as God, it was struggle inside to answer my mind, but heart is always good, lets me good.
I really liked your comment, thank you for going into depth of my feelings of poem. I adore him as man and feel him as God.

[JessyJacob]

First time, after all I wrote my writings, I got a very good praising comment, "lovely work". Yes I get flatened, if somebody praises, otherwise we just dont feel elated, with look as inferior things.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you for making me realize my mistake.

[M. J. Smith]

It is good to care for others, especially family. But it is not good to become so bound up in another person that we lose ourselves. Lessons from the road.

[JessyJacob]

I am not sure if i have to care for family only. I felt him so much needing me, it did not stop me to think of him. Maybe you are right, not to become so bound up, I am like this, what i do is with full dedication, and extend my heart so much that it goes beyond, i didnt care to loose myself, but it really hurted me when he didnt care about me, as he is not with me but with someone else. Let it go, never mind, when you love truely, that love will surely come back for you may not be the same person, this i believed when i got heart break in my bachelors. I thought his love which i wrote about him above is my true love, but he too didnt, and I am just hoping good for me, maybe my true love still exists and will be coming for me.

[M. J. Smith]

First, you have to love and forgive yourself. And if you are worth the self respect, other opinions don't matter. One must love another for who they are, not who one wishes they were. Shakespeare wrote, "Love does not change where changes it finds, nor alter where alteration it finds..." Love, true love, is kind.
Now I'm no believer in fairy tales. Life is hard. It tests. And love has to be strong to survive. But to be that strong, both sides must be of one heart, one mind, and one soul. It was Pat Benetar who sang about love being a battlefield. And the first battle, maybe the hardest, is with self. I don't know if this old drifter's words are a help. But they are offered freely in the spirit of friendship. Clear skies and open roads, my friend.

[JessyJacob]

Hi, so you think I was trying to change him? Never mind I it was my mistake only. You should have helped me long back to make clear understanding. But now it is no use, as he has gone forever, he got married. Thank you.

[JessyJacob]

I know that we should change others. Accept what they are, but I just wanted him if he needs other one, maybe live with her, I was like waiting for you to come back for me. I was thinking whether he needs me totally. This was the only thought and he was like not to stop thinking about her, so I thought I will back off. As far as I know this is the fact which I know. And I got sick and till now I am taking meds and just few weeks back I thought I am good with out meds so was missing him and was trying to understand what went wrong and why I ended up like this.

[JessyJacob]

Sorry typo, I know we should not change others. I don’t know why I am still running around love, though people break my heart. Is it my mistake don’t know I think I am craving for love, leave it. Never mind.

[M. J. Smith]

Ah, my point was that both sides must accept the other unconditionally. I'm sorry if I was not clear. And no offense was intended. Your a friend. I should be more sensitive. Not the first time my mouth has gotten me into trouble. I'm sorry, my friend. Please forgive me.

[JessyJacob]

It is my mistake only, I will not disturb anyone. Yea he truly loved me but I only didn’t accept him what he was. Never mind people are stupid enough to make mistakes. We are just humans, sometimes god also make mistakes. I wish you all the best. I will not talk again to anybody. Sincere apologies, please forgive me for my bad things. Thank you.

[M. J. Smith]

Mere dust blowing in the wind, my friend. Nothing for me to forgive. Cultures clash, but we learn. You live in India? I live in United States. But we still are human. God created us all.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I struggle with Anxiety and depression. It sucks sometimes but the cure that I've found is to write! It's the most joyful thing that I do. Just write! It will take away those pains and hardships. I would also like to say that you have real potential in your writing and I am Genuinely surprised how amazing your writing style is! It was fantastic and I just wanted to let you know that you could even one day be a published author/writer if you wanted to! Keep smiling, keep writing, and most importantly. be you! You have a talent and this is a talent that all people should see and read!
I have a story (the Blonde Girl) here about my best friend, you don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I felt like I should share it with you. :)

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/

[Cadel]

This is very abstract, but doesn't fail to be interesting. Good writing.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you Cadel