A Beautiful lady for her Only Man!

He Meditates on Her

 

 Who has a body of the colour of saffron,

Who has the three graceful eyes,

Who has a jeweled crown ,

Adorned by the moon,

Who always has a captivating smile,

Who has high and firm breasts,

Who has wine filled cup made of precious stones,

And reddish flowers in her hands,

Who forever is the ocean of peace,

And who keeps her red holy feet.

On a jeweled platform.

 

 

Who has a colour of the rising sun.

Who has eyes which are waves of mercy,

Who has bow made of sweet cane,

Arrows made of soft flowers,

And pasanugusa in her hands,

And who is surrounded,

By her devotees with powers great,

 

On her who has a smiling face,

On her who is dressed with perfection,

 

Who applies saffron on her body,

Who applies musk attracted by bees on her,

Who has a beautiful smile,

Who has with her bows, arrows and Pasangusa,

Who attracts all the souls,

Who wears red garland,

Who wears ornaments great,

And who is of the colour of the red hibiscus.

 

Reviews

[Surya]

I cant say that there are some lines here are beautiful coz each and every line described beauty and greatness of women, but that line saying about ornaments put a smile on my face, lady thoughts hahaha.....
All in all that was a beauty including the sketch....:)

[JessyJacob]

I know every lady is craze about jewelry, its the part of their look, why would one want to become celibate in family, loosing all fun with life.
Thank you for your comments.

[Surya]

Haha yeah why would some one.....and it's my pleasure reading..:)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What wonderful and colorful descriptions. I enjoyed reading the details of her beauty and her appeal to the man of her dreams. Nicely wrought.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you, for your kind review.

[sabinn]

well that is a really great poem as every line helped me sketch a picture, filling one information at a time.

[JessyJacob]

only one man is working, for his lady, yes it is the reason for it and you just mess up like kids, as you are old, you cook food adding spices all at once, then you will know the aroma and flavor of each herb or spice, other wise add everything in pressure cooker, within short time, it will be smashed, let every spice be enjoyed at right time. but don't spoil the importance of salt,

without salt curry never taste good. its time to start. my thoughts are effecting world, help me and world.

[Diamond]

Mother Lalitha... Mother Nature herself. Excellent description. Thank you for sharing it.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you, your comments/commends really worth to me, you can see my other writings too if you can make time. They are just social evils I wrote which are causing problems to the current world, thinking of eradicating with Pen(love for society), Sword(thoughts) and Paper(People's mind).

I really want to share some thoughts, there are stages in human life
1. Bachelor life
2. Married life
3. Sadhu life
at different ages, but I fell these need to be always from birth, being inside as sadhu, being bachelor in society, and lovable with responsibility in home(married life). We just need one happy family, which have been our roots from time immemorial, we are just going off track, needing more fun, randomly, where it needs to be organised inside and outside too.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is beautifully written. Each of your words capture the beauty and grace of the woman. I enjoyed reading this. Well penned :)

[JessyJacob]

thank you, very glad that you liked it.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! A pleasure :)

[Relic]

This is beautiful to read. I commend you for a wonderful poem.

[emmajoy]

' Who has a colour of the rising sun.
Who has eyes which are waves of mercy,
Who has bow made of sweet cane,
Arrows made of soft flowers, .. .. '

Incredibly beautiful and everlasting words... thank you so much for sharing them with the unaware.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you, feels delight, that I am disclosing which are hidden.

[emmajoy]

You're very welcome. Thank YOU.

[JessyJacob]

missed some words above, "That I am disclosing Hidden truths of God and Godess".

[emmajoy]

For me, no matter.. for you, perhaps vital.. the wording is still so very beautiful..

[An owl on the moon]

What a divine song that rises in this prayer to the Goddess. There flows through her strength and wonder and beauty, giving peace and life. Beautifully voiced.

[JessyJacob]

Thank you, Froman, It is not written by my, I was work of great sage in ancient time, I am just reviving them and giving a picturisation. Thank you fro understandin geach decription of line.

[JessyJacob]

A praise and prayer to mother Goddess - "lalitha devi", by her Man - "shiva". Every man dreams of her woman to be so.