Closer

for my brother...

 Come to me

closer

I'll show you the

preassure

at the back of my head

I'll find a way for

you

to be less

afraid

Beautiful boy

I can never say sorry

It is too simple for a pain such as ours

I left behind your sister a long

time ago

she's still shouting,trying to show herself

I've failed myself

but thats not hard to imagine

The only reason I don't smile is because I failed

you

we're both in this from the same bitter beginning 

I'll be here for you at the

closer.

Reviews

[Brandon]

Nice. I really liked the creative format you used, and to a great effect. If poetry was visual I would love to frame, and hang this in my study.

[bluessadmood]

its very nice ,very strong,i could see great emotions behind it,you say you failed him ,you say you will be for him at the closer ,the words and feeling are wonderful but i missed you and lost somewhere when you talk about his sister,here i was lost a little ,but its a nice writing , i loved it