Soft communications.

 you left it unanswered and never did ask

questioning what you can never handle

how will we ever remember if we can't last

soft communication from breath to each lover...   

a gentle grasp under a cover

chat up lines that seem to succeed

feeling impure and fall into me.

fall into me

and never fall out  

fall into me fall into me   

desperate encounters of passing strangers who fight

we go on our own ways separate and pass without looking

but we can't be oblivious to what isn't here tonight..

fall into me fall into me

a shallow puddle that drenches your skin

a person who is really nothing.

I only have myself to fail

I've fallen In.

Reviews

[An Open Venue]

"but we can't be oblivious to what isn't here tonight"

This is phenomenal line that shows depth beyond your years
I wish you better luck at love

Ven

[A Spectacular Case]

I love the metaphor you've used "shallow puddle that drenches your skin" it's dead clever.
It's a brilliant poem; very well written, nice one.

[Sam Summers]

"Fall into me" is a brilliant line to repeat. nice and abstract. "Questionaing what you never can handle" i love the futility in this. i love how you make trivial things like "a gentle grasp under the cover" seem so crucial.

[Rachel DeHart]

I agree with Mike, this is wonderful.
All of these lines left my head imploding.
"fall into me
and never fall out
fall into me fall into me
desperate encounters of passing strangers who fight
we go on our own ways separate and pass without looking
but we can't be oblivious to what isn't here tonight..

fall into me fall into me
a shallow puddle that drenches your skin
a person who is really nothing.
I only have myself to fail"

Wonderful as always!

[Michael Handel]

Yes Jess, yes! Muy excelente. "Fall into me" "a shallow puddle that drenches your skin".
Jeez Jess, have you been taking courses on awesomeness? Seriously.