find a feeling

MY BANDS FIRST SONG!!!:D

 find a star & wish apon it.

even though it might've died.

find a broken heart & heal it.

make a start atleast you've tried.

 

find a way & walk along it.

let your spirit be you guide.

find the space between the stations.

and just forget what you left behind.....

 

I already found myself 

waiting for something else

everytime my lie gets better

I am closer to myself.

 

find a way of being heard...

sing your song.turn up the words...

find a broken record , play it.

lose yourself inside your world.

 

find the time and don't delay it.

there's still so much left to do.

find a ship along a harbour.

sail away to somewhere new....

 

 

I already found myself

waiting for soemthing else

everytime my life gets better

I am closer to myself....

 

 

I already found myself....

waiiting for something else.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Prose-full]

"find the space between the stations.
and just forget what you left behind....."

very healing...all of it really is very healing..

great and inspiring to me...

'lose yourself inside your world."
...find the time and don't delay it."

bravo! congrats on your bands 1st song..amazing..

[Titus McGuire]

I really liked this piece, it was well written and the scheme of the verses seemed rather clever and witty.

[Ryan Siddall]

So many perfect images are created, all so fitting as well. The stanzas work well together, and i really like the first two.

[Alice]

find a star & wish apon it.
even though it might've died.
=) I love how starlight takes so long to travel to your eyes that you�re actually seeing stars how they were millions of years ago so you might be seeing something that doesn�t exist anymore. It�s mindblowing.
I love this it flows pretty and firey.

find a way of being heard...
sing your song.turn up the words...
find a broken record , play it.
lose yourself inside your world.

Best advice I�ve heard in a long while.
You�re gonna go far honey.
XXXXX

[Enigma]

OMG!! That was WOW!!
Such rhythm, melody flows out of it.One of the best songs that I've read here. Just a bit of re-checking would get rid of the tupos and stuff...
It's stunning, I tell you. I'm blown away by the rhymes in this. Feels so natural....
And just reading it made me feel great. Yeah! Hopeful too... ^_^
I'd love to hear its acoustic version....lolz
Very well written. Fantastic job!!!