aneurysm

This winter I spent two months in a mental institution & its scarred me for life.i meet great people though & those people were the only people that made me better.I wish I could still see them.

the day fades into evening, all these feelings keep me breathing. I walked away from everyone I loved. I fought back when it all got too much. she sat with me in the television light. grabbing air in desperate spite. Lost reflexes she turned to me. I saw what I had to be. watch those friends from a distant meter, realising I can't keep them. true compassion on my behalf. they'll turn away and let out a laugh. I try to stand tall and say.... "I'll give it another chance today" fleeting romance underlines my nose. I let it slip to god knows.. One last chance to win the race. I'll always be a mental-case. you make out I'm a VILLAIN. I only wish to make a living. the girl snaps out of it and turns wearily to the window fearfully. I went in saw her standing there. I came back out and watched her stare. cherishing the nature from inside an institution. all these young ones why choose them?

 

 

Reviews

[Jaffa Forbes]

This has got something, the best stuff I've read of yours so far. Good stuff, well done!
Jaff :)

[Sam Summers]

wow, i mean ive never been in amental institution, but this makes me feel like i have. thought provoking.

[Kayleigh]

This is a very beautiful poem! =]
I can feel all the emotions in this and picture it right in my mind, and I love it! :)
Very well-written! :]