A Secret Place

A place to escape

 

A Secret Place

 

 

Across the river and over the rocks,

down a steep path its beauty talks

 

A secret place for you and I,

Relief from the world,

a natural high!

 

Your my inspiration, your my best

friend, Please say that are love will

never end..

 

"I Love You", thats straight from the

heart!  On a scale 1 to 10, Its way

off the chart!

 

We can talk together, we get along

so well.. I know there's nothing to

hide because with you, I can tell..

 

Qualities about you make me see

just how special you are to me.

 

And as long as this place continues

to be, than it will always be a secret

place, A place for you and me!

Reviews

[Brandon]

Very well done. Great flow and meaning. One thing I will say, the forth phrase down starting with "I Love You", it seems to me it kind of breaks the flow up a bit. Other than that great job.

[nostal]

Very sweet and nice.
Good job.

[*~Kristy~*]

This was very beautiful! Set up nice as well!!! I mean, the way it rhymed and the way you wrote was amazing! You told of the love of someone you cared about, and of a beautiful place. It was conveyed perfectly! :)