Broken

A poem about deep love.

How could you?

You were like a white rose

A pure, innocent flower,

And then you started rotting, and I saw your reality

How could you?

I couldn't do anything when you blew the candle fire,

The only flame that gave me warmth on those hours

You weren't contented, you stabbed me in the heart

How could you?

You drive me suicidal,

You drive me insane,

I am still wondering,

How could you leave me in my darkest pace?

Because you could.

I blame myself of my agony

If it weren't for me I wouldn't have a heartbreak

If it weren't for me you would have lived.

I am tired.

I am tired of thinking about you

I am tired of knowing you won't be with me anymore

I am tired of thinking we'll get back

I am tired of thinking there's a boundary

Don't worry, now. I am following you to your rest.

Reviews

[Curtis.Lenker]

Good work here. Its pretty intense. I could feel everything while reading. It has such powerful emotion. I can relate very well. thanks for sharing.

[jessicawrites]

Thank you!

[Curtis.Lenker]

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Your welcome

[Mr. Hamilton]

ist stanza: 16?
the rest: goes back to the first.
Thank you.

[jessicawrites]

Thank you for reviewing! I am confused by your comment, can you explain further?