Chapter 7

   Axis have already stayed on the time machine for a very long time, although the  red dot is still flashing, but Axis still couldn't track Masie and Fontanne. He began to cry. "Why? Why I couldn't find them? i know I had done a bad job being a brother. I would improve! Dear my beloved god, please help me! I am such a freak that just care about my work and not my family. Masie! Fontanne! You need to wait for me! I willl come and find you!

  Onthe other hand, Masie and Fontanne are still flying in the tunnel .Suddenly, like last time, they saw a strong stream of light coming from above.  "Come on! masie! We..... We reached somewhere!" masie zoomed up to the stream of light, then "Poof!" they arrived in an other tunnel. they didn't know that this is the tunnel named "The maze" lots of scientists got lost in here and never come back out to human world."Oops! We shouldn't have come in. "Said Fontanne."Lets go back out!".But as Masie turned the time machine around, they couldn't find the entrance. "Ahhhhhh! We are once trapped in this stupid tunnel again!"Masie shouted. At the same time, music began to fill the tunnel. Masie and Fontanne was truly attracted by the music,they stopped complaining.

     A screen like the cinema appeared in the tunnel .It is playing the part Axis said in the tunnel when he is finding Masie and Fontanne.(See first paragraph) Masie and Fontanne watched while they cried all the way. "I have never thought of axis like that. I just think he is my super brother who is a genius at building time machines.Why he thinks like that!" Masie said with tears flying on her cheeks.Fontanne tried to console her, but she just kept on crying. "Come on,Masie,don't cry. Your brother knows how you think about him. He is just to worried about you. I am sure he thinks you are a great sister of his. We need to be brave, we will see him one day.Be brave!"

Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

I still don't understand!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story. Need more description of the characters and where they went. People like to feel the characters are real and love to hear about new places and customs.
Coyote