Chapter 6

 

Chapter6

“Oh, gosh!” said Fontanne. “What are we going to do now??” Masie said, “Fontanne, I am scared!! I want to go home!!” “I knew you want to go home. But we don’t even know how to control it!! So, we need to be strong. You already have managed to clear the other ones, why can’t you clear the other ones, why can’t you clear this one??” answered Fontanne. “Right! You’re always correct!” Masie said with tears in her eyes. The time machine went on spinning and spinning, the cousins slowly sell asleep. Soon, the time machine slowly stopped. Fontanne and Masie woke up. They realized the time machine had stopped. “Uh, where're we?” asked Masie. They thought that they have land, so Masie got off the time machine. But instead of landing, Masie’s feet can’t reach the ground. She shouted with fear “Help, Fontanne, help me! I think I am falling! Can you grab me up? Please help me!” Just right after she finished the sentence, her hands ran out of energy. She began to fall down. But, just then, Fontanne reached out and grabbed her back. Masie was heavy, soon, Fontanne felt tired, and she also doesn’t have enough power!! Masie feel that she is falling down. So, she asked Fontanne to pull her up. Fontanne used all her energy, and then she pulled Masie back in the time machine. When Fontanne saw Masie, she quickly gave her a big, the most enormous hug in the world. The, after the hug, Masie said” You are the best cousin in the world. You saved my life!! Fontanne, you are my hero! I love you!” Fontanne is in touch. She…..She cried! Then, she said to Masie, "Masie, see…. You become brave! I am very proud of you!” “Thank you.” shouted Masie.

After a while, they started to deliberate about the time machine. Masie pressed almost every button in the machine. Then, the machine accidentally moved. It started to spin again.

Now, Axis is tracking Fontanne and Masie. His red dot on the screen is flashing. He is extremely happy. “After I find them, we will go home and I will not keep any secrets to them anymore. I promise I will be a very brilliant brother and a caring cousin. If…..only if I could find them!” he murmured. After that, tears began to drop down. Axis got a handkerchief and whipped his face. He began to find Fontanne and Masie again.

Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

tOOOOOOOOOOO LONG FOR me to read. I don't understand what you are writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good chapter. A lot of events in this chapter. When you have a invention like a time machine. Best hide it. I like the ending. Axis had some good and logical thoughts.
Coyote