Children in Puberty

Children in Puberty

A Poem by Jessica

 

 

their legs are getting longer

their feet are growing too

they're starting to get pimples

they're  glad that we are too!

 

The boys are talking 'six packs'

The girls discussing bras

Make-up, fashion, friendships

Boys are mad on cars

 

Confusing and exciting

the self they feel and see

I guess that they are changing

into an adult them.

 

© 2010 Jessica


Author's Note

Jessica
Don't let them see this!!!

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This version..
So cool!
Better than the last one so.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I certainly remember feeling myself at that age... I couldn't keep my hands off...

Posted 14 Years Ago


"I guess that they are changing

into an adult them."

I think you should and selves after, them, because it totally makes no sense, but I really liked the poem though, keep up the good work. :)


Posted 14 Years Ago


I see it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Go die!!!!!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


interesting very interseting

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jessica
Jessica

Hong Kong



About
Jessica's the name. I am a fifteen year old young lady who originated from Hong Kong and studies abroad in the UK at the moment. I have a passion towards writing, but it seemed to be buried with the.. more..

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A Poem by Jessica